What I would Give myself
Title: The Marae - A Special Place In The Community
Target - 31 and over
Page Score - /48
Goal - In Between 40 and 48
A Marae is a place where you can celebrate the different times of the year such as birthdays,
huis (eg Meetings), hakas, maori new year, tangis. Use education for an example of things you can
learn in the marae! Another reason the marae is a special place in the community is hauora. Hauora is
safety and being healthy, how you feel physically and emotionally .
huis (eg Meetings), hakas, maori new year, tangis. Use education for an example of things you can
learn in the marae! Another reason the marae is a special place in the community is hauora. Hauora is
safety and being healthy, how you feel physically and emotionally .
A Marae is a cultural place where celebrations happen such as Birthdays for the start of adulthood,
There is meetings to protect the lands, rivers, mountains, followed by educational workshops, tangi. A
tangi is a sad event placed in a marae for death. A taingi is also a well respected event in a marae, people
bring their dead relative, friend, mate and family member there so the dead person can get the blessings
from their iwi.
There is meetings to protect the lands, rivers, mountains, followed by educational workshops, tangi. A
tangi is a sad event placed in a marae for death. A taingi is also a well respected event in a marae, people
bring their dead relative, friend, mate and family member there so the dead person can get the blessings
from their iwi.
Education! Back in the day there were no schools to go to but maori learnt in a marae, they learnt
how to interact in english and they were taught waiatas and hakas and powhiri, even now the marae is
still open for education in te reo maori since now in the 2000 the community is going more for english and
forgetting about te reo as more foreigners are coming into the country.
how to interact in english and they were taught waiatas and hakas and powhiri, even now the marae is
still open for education in te reo maori since now in the 2000 the community is going more for english and
forgetting about te reo as more foreigners are coming into the country.
Hauora is where your health matters, by the emotions and all, helping one another makes them
mentally happy and you, it’s not only about you in a marae it is about the community and your
living surroundings. Hauora is being well physically, emotionally.
mentally happy and you, it’s not only about you in a marae it is about the community and your
living surroundings. Hauora is being well physically, emotionally.
In Conclusion, a marae is a special cultural place because all of these happen, Celebrations,
Education, Hauora feeling well mentally and physically.
Education, Hauora feeling well mentally and physically.
This is why the marae is a really special place!!!
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The Marae
A marae is a sacred home for the community, you can celebrate all sorts of events like birthdays, huis,
workshop meetings, weddings, tangis which is a really respected event. Back in the day school wasn’t open
so tribes got taught in a marae so they can be educated. In a marae the ancestors want to make sure everyones
healthy, hauora is how you feel emotionally, physically, mentally.
workshop meetings, weddings, tangis which is a really respected event. Back in the day school wasn’t open
so tribes got taught in a marae so they can be educated. In a marae the ancestors want to make sure everyones
healthy, hauora is how you feel emotionally, physically, mentally.
One of the most respected events out of all weddings, huis, workshop meetings, birthdays is tangis. A tangi is
the most respected event because it is about the death of some one, a person brings the dead person to the marae
so the dead person can get blessings before they have to leave. The relative, family member or friend will say their
goodbyes. A tangi is a way to find connections to you might see distant relatives.
the most respected event because it is about the death of some one, a person brings the dead person to the marae
so the dead person can get blessings before they have to leave. The relative, family member or friend will say their
goodbyes. A tangi is a way to find connections to you might see distant relatives.
The community go to a marae since in our schools their isn't much people to teach te reo or tomata
karakia, himene, waiata and mihi powhiris, hakas. A marae is open to anyone who wants to learn te reo or
powhiri and be a proud maori, a marae is still open for education.
karakia, himene, waiata and mihi powhiris, hakas. A marae is open to anyone who wants to learn te reo or
powhiri and be a proud maori, a marae is still open for education.
Hauora is how you feel mentally, physically and emotionally not only you but others, since humanity was
said to be unfair, the community helps everyone in the marae like prepare dishes all together and do tasks
so it is done faster not only will you feel better but they will too so it's about hauora to the community.
said to be unfair, the community helps everyone in the marae like prepare dishes all together and do tasks
so it is done faster not only will you feel better but they will too so it's about hauora to the community.
In conclusion a marae is a heritage it's a sacred and historical place with all the koru patterns. Being able to
celebrate events in a marae. Now maori humanity can learn the country's language, but noticing you can tell
so many foreigners are coming, so english is now used more than te reo. Hauora is your health and how you
are individually feeling well, healthy, safe takes way confidential feelings (how you feel about yourself).
celebrate events in a marae. Now maori humanity can learn the country's language, but noticing you can tell
so many foreigners are coming, so english is now used more than te reo. Hauora is your health and how you
are individually feeling well, healthy, safe takes way confidential feelings (how you feel about yourself).
Governmental research shows that a marae is a perfect companion for foreigners to see the sculptures.
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