I always walk to the bus and wondered where my
favourite spot is, my favourite spot is in my dreams.
If I tell you something, Don't Tell Anyone!!! So I can
choose my dreams sometimes you might be saying
how is that possible!. Well I think of the thing I want to do
than I slowly drift down to sleep, I have even controlled my
dreams so I thought about being in a lost hospital with
zombies, I controlled where I walked what I picked up and
what I do, every time I wake up I am still tired, I loved that
dream and every time this person comes into my dreams and
the dream just fades away and I wake up but
favourite spot is, my favourite spot is in my dreams.
If I tell you something, Don't Tell Anyone!!! So I can
choose my dreams sometimes you might be saying
how is that possible!. Well I think of the thing I want to do
than I slowly drift down to sleep, I have even controlled my
dreams so I thought about being in a lost hospital with
zombies, I controlled where I walked what I picked up and
what I do, every time I wake up I am still tired, I loved that
dream and every time this person comes into my dreams and
the dream just fades away and I wake up but
every time I try to remember who the person was, my brain hits
it and I don’t know,
it and I don’t know,
The sad thing is that I cant reenter into the dream and continue.
And my favourite spot is my dreams
I have seen images of it on google and it is really known
no matter what your religion is, you're still welcome to this
special place, this special place serves 100,000 meals a day
so in a month is around 3,000,000 or more at night the lights
shimmer, the shimmery glow can tell the story it is very beautiful
and light
at night, this is a special Marae and no I am not comparing it to
others but this one stands out in my heart.
no matter what your religion is, you're still welcome to this
special place, this special place serves 100,000 meals a day
so in a month is around 3,000,000 or more at night the lights
shimmer, the shimmery glow can tell the story it is very beautiful
and light
at night, this is a special Marae and no I am not comparing it to
others but this one stands out in my heart.
This Marae tells the story of how the Hindu leader tried to take
over the Sikh's land (Castle) and there as a war once the
Sikhs found out they told their leader and that leader came
up with a plan and stayed calm the plan was not deadly and
no enemy will die, the Sikhs had big challenges to up come
and they happen to come betrayed and hurt
over the Sikh's land (Castle) and there as a war once the
Sikhs found out they told their leader and that leader came
up with a plan and stayed calm the plan was not deadly and
no enemy will die, the Sikhs had big challenges to up come
and they happen to come betrayed and hurt
This special Marae is located in India Punjab
The name is really respected no religion in India has ever
talked behind backs for this Marae
talked behind backs for this Marae
Amrit Sahib or Amritsar is the name and
that means Golden Temple
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jasnoor, I‘m Faith and i attend Bay of Islands College. I really love how you have set out your blog page. I can tell that you have really thought about what you are going to post. I think that you could possibly go into just a little bit more depth of this subject. I would love to know what has made you choose this topic and did it inspire you?
Thank you so much, and next I will surely add why I choose the topics.
DeleteThank you again Faith
Kia Ora Jasooner I’m Izaiah from Paihia School. I really enjoyed reading about your spot. Dreams are something that I don’t regularly hear or talk about with my peers. To hear that, it is cool and interesting because it’s something knew. The vocabulary you used describing the feelings you feel while being in your dreams are outstanding. I want to see more of this type of writing from you because you display and describe it like no one else that I’ve seen throughout you school or any other school I’ve commented on. Do you like being able to control your dreams? Thank you Jasooner, have a good day and keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteYes I really like controlling my dreams, thank you for your significant comment, and I am aiming for rubric 5 and 6 and you have encouraged me more thanks for commenting on me Izaiah
DeleteMy name is Darrius and I am a year eight student from Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post I think it is pretty cool that you can control your dreams. Did you think about doing random things. Do you enjoy controlling your dreams?
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