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Sunday, September 1, 2019

:Explain Writing: "My Dream Home/My Ideal Home"

;Explanation Writing;
My Dream Home


Firstly, my dream home would be a 3-story home,
where me and my family would live together. I want a house
this big so my relatives can come over and stay for a few
months. And since I have a lot of relatives 6 can come a year,
and my parents can make their passports.


secondly, - there should also be a backyard with grass
and there should be trees around to make the yard look more
natural.
I mean my house has a backyard but it isn’t really a yard and
it is dangerous if you trip over, because there is a lot of rocks
and those rocks will turn to concrete in about 2 - 6 years.


Thirdly, my dream home should have 1 Kitchen, 4 Bedrooms,
2 Bathrooms, I back yard, 2 Balconies, 1 Dining Room,
1 Garage, 1 storage room, 1 personal gym, 1 pool, 
1 Laundry room & a living room.
 And I really love exploring so it would be awesome
to have a big home.And it must feel home like, like,
safe, fun, big, warm in winter and cold in summer and
it must smell like Jasmine scent.

Lastly, I want my house to be located in New Zealand,
Kaikohe in town because I love Kaikohe and I feel safe
in Kaikohe I also know a lot of people so this is how
my house should be like, look like, smell like

In Conclusion, I think this house would be awesome, I would
have a yard and so many rooms also being located in a country I
love so I think this would be the home of my dreams and it will
feel homey like because my family will live with me.  

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jasnoor my name is LJ and I go to Kawakawa Primary School I really like this post because it really describes what your dream house wants to look like you have a amazing sculpture in text I would like to see it in real life until then maybe later you can check out my blog @http://kpsljm.blogspot.com/ blog you later.

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    1. Thank you so much LJ
      for your awesome Comment

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