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Friday, February 28, 2020

Meaningful Friendships (self assessment)

(Jasnoors) 
Meaningful Friendship


What is a friend and what are their key elements? Friends elaborate onto different human-like
elements such as supportiveness, humorous, Over protectiveness.


Beginning with supportiveness, a supportive friend is someone who will support your every
decision, they will cheer you on from behind, they will also keep your secrets to themselves
and support your every secret, decision, relationship with you, and  mistake. They will support
you in bad and good, beginning to end. Your friend would like you for you, not for who you want
to be.


Going to humorous, humorous is an awesome element in a friend, if your down or so they will
be the first to notice, the first to try make you smile and the first to make you smile, humorous
behaviour is also dictated as a
formula for depression/sadness as an humorous friend feels warm to be around, sticking to
the key point humour is a human
like element which is the beginning of new friendships or the way to continue friendships.


Ending off with over protectiveness. Over protectiveness can also be a jealousy sign
within humans, your friend will be fighting with you, protecting you from what may harm you.
Over protectiveness can also be seen
as jealousy if you talk to someone else or make a new
friend their highly going to be jealous, a true friend would want you for themselves
which isn't bad at all.


In conclusion, a friend's key elements are supportiveness,  they will stick up for you in bad and
good times. Humorous, they will be the first to make you smile. Therefore and over
protectiveness, they will be with you, fight along with you, harm anyone who harms you.
They're your friend but, are you their friend?


Ideas
S & L
Organisation
Vocab
S & S
Punctuation
Spelling
T
6/6
5/6
6/6
6/6
6/6
6/6
6/6
41/42
6 + 5 + 6 + 6 + 6 + 6 + 6 = 41


Why I gave myself 6 for Ideas!
My ideas show insight, originality and some reflection on the
wider world.
Why I gave myself a 5 for Structure and Language!
My writing is structured appropriately and is well developed
and I use a range of language features which some of them
further extend what I am trying to say.
Why I gave myself a 6 for Organisation!
My Ideas are organised in paragraphs. I also use language
features that link my ideas.
Why I gave myself a 6 for Vocabulary!
I deliberately and constantly use precise vocabulary.
Why I gave myself a 6 for Structure sentence!
 I can write a variety of sentences which are all grammatically
correct.
Why I gave myself a 6 for Punctuation!
 I am able to use most punctuation correctly to make what I
have written easier to understand.
Why I gave myself a 6 for Spelling!

I spell essential list words and a range of difficult words
with a few or no errors.

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